Need Reviews for this Design !

[iamrogue25]

Hi Guyz ,

I want some reviews for this new matte painting(Under Construction) and also some suggestions on how to make it better would be great.I am not happy with the result so far . Have a Flight in 11 Hours would be returning in 10 days but before that please some response would be great !


ROGUE

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Matte Painting[UC]

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[dljawed]

dude you should contact with 3d building design consulting firms instead of seeking any positive help here!
bcoz am doing job at JCI vich provide construction management services so last time our client was demanded for 3d view of his retail outlet so my Boss contacted with 3d design consultant and they charged 3.2 $/Hour for the particular job..

 

[Froomple]

I am not a big fan of Matte Paintings, considering the technicalities involved in it :P
Its pretty impressive IMO, just requires a few corrections, which i am sure you would do it as a final thing.

check the light distribution on the buildings and the tower behind the building on the right side, we can clearly see that its been put new. Try merging them properly, and yes, the main building's edges are not smooth, check them as well

 

[iamrogue25]

Hi ,

Thanks for your reply ! Actually its a Work i did as i was getting bored , not for any company so nothing have been done with technicalities .

but, i really appreciate the feedback !

Thank You

 

[MrOSX]

The fat building in the middle wrecks it :facepalm:

 

[iamrogue25]

 

[Johnny:D]

Fat building lol [meh]

 

[I am ANGEL]

i liked good job :D

 

[iamrogue25]

Thank You

 

[lemuelmayers]

Hi,If you want to know what seems to be the problem with your design. I should say that seek a professional that would understand your work and give you some advice. I'd let you visit http://easydiywebsite.com.au wherein they have professional designers to talk you with personally and ask all your concerns.

 

[b1gj4v]

i like the sky in the edited image

 

[Shahrukh]

the inner clouds looks fake much!