I think the idea is ok but the exudation need's work. The text is too faint and the lines are too strong. As said everything need's to be blended more and remember the text should be number one and readable.
1.5/5 but it is a good start and their plenty to work off.
EDIT: that's 3/10 fyi and come on guys give pointers not just it fails or it's crap. Try and give ideas like I've tried.
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